Wednesday, June 30, 2021

Tony  and Toby were boys playing around in the park then they heard an old man say “hey are ya boys looking to make some money? Well ‘ere is ya lucky day! Just get in my van for 10,000 dollars” the boys looked at the dusty van behind the man and stood there in confusion “c’mon do ya guys dont like money? I work for a company called Free Money Just Get In My Van. Here's my business card” It didn't look convincing that all there was was a poorly cut small piece of paper with his name and a poorly drawn self-portrait. The boys looked at the paper and decided to……………….not get in the van   you expect me to say they did? C’mon be more realistic,  as the boys were about to leave the conversation they strolled off and Phil became frustrated and said “Don't turn your back on  me boy!”and decided to grab them and put a bag over there head 

The man's van was really disgusting with rusty walls and stained carpet to what smells like mountain dew. They could barely breath and they eventually fell asleep and became unconscious. They woke up confused, surprised it was already night time. It was pitch black they could hear the wind howling beyond the walls. The temperature was freezing , they couldn't see anything except the moon they crawled around trying to see what was around them. They felt something weird around their arms and feet SHACKLES! They started shouting for help but no one could hear them.

Phil heard there rambling and walked towards them phil said “oi its the middle of the night some people are trying to sleep y'know, quit talking or i'll make you sleep outside haha” they crawled around some more suddenly they felt a shiver going down there spine A BONE (dun dun dunnnn) and it appears to be human then they realised what would happen to them if they don't get out. They prayed and started crying then something magical happened that the both of them couldn't explain the skeletons arms started to move and a head around the corner twisted to look at them they were terrified then the hand floated up and came straight at their legs they. They thought that the arm was trying to rip off its leg but it actually freed them of there shackles the arm flew to the head and carried it towards them Guts “quick both of you get up and get the key” the boys walked to the door trying to open it but it won't budge he looked out of the little window and noticed a key, he tried to grab it but his hand won't fit the he had an idea he grabbed the skeletons hand Guts “hey!! What are you doing!?!?” he threw it out of the window and told him to get the  key and open the door, they got out and then they creepily snuck pass the door where they could see phill dozing off with a pizza box on his tummy he passed the door still creepily walking then he stepped on the wrong floor board and it cracked and  made a rather large noise they ran as fast as possible but he found out that the door was locked and he fell in despair as phil came walking down in his pajamas. Phil “nowhere to hide now little boy” then guts released a threw Toby's shoe at Phil and flew up in the sky but well he kind of miss calculated and they flew way up in the sky carrying the house and became stars

The stars are Toby's shoes, Guts' two bones, Phil's pizza box and his collection of fake business cards.                                  THE END.

 

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